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Unable to sleep lying awake.
Jumbled thoughts an endless quake.
Churning and broiling a tangled thread.
Events relieved over and over again.
Pondering and fretting the last words that were said.
An endless loop wondering what would be.
Had I only said this and not that, do you see?
Learning the hard way it's easier to leave things unsaid
Than recapture them once they've already fled.
Hurting you in a careless moment I sincerely regret.
Thoughts of your pain making me fret.
Desperately trying to make my amends.
Asking forgiveness and absolution again.
Finding too late some things can Never be unsaid.

Eli 1-12-2012
written by me on 1-12-2012
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DevilsMatrix Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Learning the hard way it's easier to leave thoughts unsaid
^^ This line seams abit awkward in the flow?

The last line is fantastic, good job. Love how subtle this is,
it's really beautiful. Great read.

Sincerely;
The literature section stalker
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